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Posted on 11/12/07 11:21:26 PM |
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Emma81
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Critique
Hi, Would like to know what you think and any advice you can offer Thank you 
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Posted on 12/12/07 02:15:05 AM |
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tank172
ThreeDee Thriller Posts: 692 Reply  |
Re: Critique
Hi Emma and welcome to the forum! I like the erie, dusk lighting you've been able to create. Initially, I had trouble making out the figure, but then thought about your composition and I think it works. The lighting looks just as though I were walking through the woods minutes before nightfall. Good job. I would possibly make the puddle a bit smaller, just so it's not touching his foot. I think it will better match the perspective of the path. Maybe return just a faint hint of lightness around the figure. As it looks now, he's in the middle of an opening in the woods. So, naturally the moonlight will add a touch of spotlight around him and areas of the path around him. --Chris |
Posted on 13/12/07 10:08:06 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: Critique
A very emotive image altogether - but perhaps just a little too dark. I agree with all of Chris' comments, especially about the bloodstain: it needs to be flatter, and further away, to appear to be on the ground. |
Posted on 13/12/07 7:41:23 PM |
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Progenic
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Re: Critique
Hi Emma to be honest i cant really make out wheather the man is hanging by his neck or stung up with his hands, and are there other poeple in the background ? spooky indeed |
Posted on 31/12/07 4:59:41 PM |
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Emma81
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Re: Critique
Thank you all for your comments! |