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Posted on 12/11/10 9:12:15 PM |
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Emil
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Poster
Hello everyone, I am working on exercise about posters. I have made one fulfill of information and on second with minimum information. Can you help me and send your comments (critique) which of the design works best? It is about what is the key information which needs be include. Your comments will be appreciated?  _________________ The most beatiful thing we can experience is mysterious. It is the source of all true art and sience. - Albert Einstein |
Posted on 13/11/10 07:09:54 AM |
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Nick Curtain
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Re: Poster
Hi Emil Personally, I like the second version for its simplicity. The music and keyboard in the first make it rather busy and the bottom left area (his suit) lends itself perfectly to text. The question is what do you include? From the information, I'd guess that this is a play about Chopin, where music forms part of the production, rather than a concert? If so, my view would be to explain that somehow. Unless the actors are well known, I would refer only to the main character and let the performance programme give the full information. Where is Chris Berry when you need him? Chris produces beautiful posters for his local theatre, so have a look for his work on the forum. Nick |
Posted on 13/11/10 09:54:18 AM |
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Emil
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Re: Poster
Hi Nick many thanks for your comment. You absolutely right, the poster invites rather to a concert than to play. So I put there a photo from this play. I also looked at Chris posters and their are beautiful.  _________________ For me the creative process is more one of discovery than creation. - James Lee Burke |
Posted on 13/11/10 11:51:01 AM |
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Emil
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Re: Poster
At the second version I feel something disturbing me. So I made them bigger. deleted _________________ The most beatiful thing we can experience is mysterious. It is the source of all true art and sience. - Albert Einstein |
Posted on 13/11/10 11:53:05 AM |
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Emil
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 _________________ The most beatiful thing we can experience is mysterious. It is the source of all true art and sience. - Albert Einstein |
Posted on 13/11/10 1:14:27 PM |
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Nick Curtain
Model Master Posts: 1768 Reply |
Re: Poster
Hi Emil - that's fabulous in my view. Nick |
Posted on 13/11/10 2:24:32 PM |
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Emil
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Hi Nick - thank you for your comment/help with that. Emil _________________ The most beatiful thing we can experience is mysterious. It is the source of all true art and sience. - Albert Einstein |
Posted on 13/11/10 2:52:08 PM |
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laddition
femme fatale Posts: 585 Reply  |
Re: Poster
Emil, i love all of them! 
Mais c'est la première de celle là que je préfère! http://www.howtocheatinphotoshop.com/cgi-bin/simpleforum_files/attachments/chopin_spojeny.jpg _________________ Mais je me connais, je lâcherais pas l'affaire.... Je vais piquer de grève comme on pique une colère... Plus têtue que tous les vieil homme et la mer... Pour que continue le combat ordinaire! |
Posted on 13/11/10 5:47:32 PM |
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Deborah Morley
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Re: Poster
Hello Emil, I really like your final version and love the way the head is incorporated into the dress. The only thing now is the parasol handle looks a bit awkward. |
Posted on 13/11/10 6:07:36 PM |
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Emil
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Many thanks Véronique and Deborah for your comment. Deborah you right, the parasol is awkward. Thank you for that point, I did not see it. I will try to correct it. Emil _________________ For me the creative process is more one of discovery than creation. - James Lee Burke |