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Posted on 13/04/11 8:04:35 PM |
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Dooley
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Enemy Terrotory
An image i created for a competition. Any thoughts ?  _________________ I've fallen and I can't get up. |
Posted on 13/04/11 10:18:44 PM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
Beautiful lighting - particularly good getting the light and shade on the face to match the tone of the background. I'd like to have more of an idea what the man is carrying, though: a rifle? A spear? A club? And I feel I'd like to see further down the corridor: it's as if the focus of the image is just out of shot. How was the figure made? Is this Poser? |
Posted on 13/04/11 11:31:01 PM |
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Dooley
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
Thanks. It's a baseball bat. The face is a free render of a game character, the hoodie itself i had in my stock photos, not sure where i got it. I could move the background a bit to the right, that would save me moving the thug. I have no real talent when it comes to drawing so i either find what i want or go out and photograph it. _________________ I've fallen and I can't get up. |
Posted on 14/04/11 10:45:48 PM |
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Dooley
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
Moved it enough to see the end of the underpass.  _________________ I've fallen and I can't get up. |
Posted on 14/04/11 11:14:55 PM |
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Jota120
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
Looks great Rob and that change adds a lot IMHO! But opens other thoughts ... Maybe I should not say this, but debris of .?*.... I have a very small PS/art point comment with the baseball bat shadow. Not strong enough compared with the rest of the hoody shadow on his clothes? |
Posted on 14/04/11 11:23:55 PM |
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Jota120
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
Looks great Rob and that change adds a lot IMHO! But opens other thoughts ... Maybe I should not say this, but debris of .?*.... I have a very small PS/art point comment with the baseball bat shadow. Not strong enough compared with the rest of the hoody shadow on his clothes? Just a small share, but in some respects reminds me in some ways of this ]http://www.howtocheatinphotoshop.com/cgi-bin/simpleforum_pro.cgi?fid=04&topic_id=1262724786 |
Posted on 15/04/11 07:54:22 AM |
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Dooley
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Re: Enemy Terrotory
You could be right about that shadow, I was trying not to overdo anything. _________________ I've fallen and I can't get up. |