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Posted on 14/09/18 09:28:34 AM
Mariner
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Re: Challenge 722: The library
Thank you Steve for your detailed critique. I have made a mental note not to make the same mistakes again, especially this one:
it should include a bit of blue sky, otherwise it looks at first glance as if they’re inside the box
and this one:
They should be the same distance as the original couple - so in this case, they’d be out of shot.



Posted on 14/09/18 11:31:04 AM
Jota120
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Re: Challenge 722: The library
Thanks Steve. When I've been cycling I've never had the inclination either to participate in seeing how many cyclists you can get in a telephone box.

Michael I'd stick with Steve's advice, I was off on another tangent to somewhere...
Addition: I think you set yourself up for a difficult task there, but well done taking the challenge. It's good that Steve gives you ideas how to fix it. Sorry I didn't have much time to explain or really offer suggestions,. I wasn't sure



Posted on 14/09/18 11:40:33 AM
lwc
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Re: Challenge 722: The library
Steve Caplin wrote:
A curious Uber cart in the second entry - is that a retaining bar visible through the phone box window? I don’t know which version of The Cabinet of Dr Caligari you’ve seen, but I don’t remember the pumpkin head man seen in the third entry


If I understand what you are referring to, I think it is the original seatback from the other side of the UBER wagon (originally made for fortia).



The pumpkin head man was working on a future Halloween challenge and photo bombed the Dr. Caligari bit.

In retrospect, I probably should have posted my first impression shown below. I think I liked it best anyway...



...this is another case of me fooling with something (I probably made six or seven different versions) until I ruin it!

Thanks Steve.


Posted on 14/09/18 2:12:20 PM
srawland
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Re: Challenge 722: The library
Thank you, Steve

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Posted on 23/09/18 4:32:29 PM
josephine harvatt
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Re: Challenge 722: The library
Oops! I read those as being in the background outside the box. Missed some lovely entries as I have been away from the computer this week so nice to catch up.

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