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Posted on 20/09/18 8:19:00 PM |
michael sinclair
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Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Sara, I liked your animated /fuse/poser: neat and clean. ![]() Michael where did you get another Harley Davidson photo with a biker on it: it's too realistic to have been photoshopped? ![]() |
Posted on 20/09/18 11:56:40 PM |
tooquilos
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Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Hi Sara, its a Fuse model. I found one in the driving position and then masked out parts of his body that wouldn’t be seen when he was riding the bike. _________________ Dorothy: Toto, I've a feeling we're not in Kansas anymore |
Posted on 21/09/18 05:07:40 AM |
Mariner
Renaissance Mariner Posts: 3060 Reply ![]() |
Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Hi Michael. I hope you are back in good health. The bike in the challenge is a Honda Goldwing. I searched the web for a Hell's Angel to fit on it and finally found this: ![]() |
Posted on 21/09/18 08:20:04 AM |
Steve Caplin
Administrator Posts: 7025 Reply ![]() |
Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
First to jump on the bike was lwc, with nicely posed woman in a curious animation - the much zooming back and forth. No finger on the trigger button? I like the background in the second entry - neat cutout, too. An interesting creeping visual effect in the second entry - gangrene? An immaculate cutout (with fine reflections in the chrome) from DavidMac, with three scantily-clad ladies draping themselves over the equipment. they do look most uncomfortable. There’s something odd about the photographer in the foreground - I think he’s probably too small, and I don’t think you’d be able to get a view of him looking down like that when the distant bikers show you’re not up a ladder. A remarkable selfie from GKB - a secret fantasy? Very fine lettering, too, and an immaculate cutout. I was most taken with the 1973 photo - you reckless hooligan. A night scene from tooquilos, with what looks like a Fuse-built rider. I really like the gleam on the chrome work. Is that a new front wheel? I like the sparkling bike in the showroom in the animated version, but is it deliberately very small? A nicely built garage, great dust effects, and the real wildlife really adds to the effect. Like the clouds! A different bike - but at least it is a bike - from michael sinclair, in a nicely wrought animation. Although I normally think your animations would work better in three frames than two, I think this one does the job. One thing I’ve noticed, Michael: you always choose very detailed and busy skies. I really think these distract the eye, detracting from the image: a calmer sky would make the whole effect stronger. A neat cutout from srawland, with a figure leaning over the bike who’s rather curiously hidden behind the windshield. Maybe it’s just the angle. No shadow beneath the bike? Ah - I see in the animated version it was just the angle. Great voiceover from your talented friend. The woman walking past does need to bounce a little, though, or it looks like she’s on a conveyor belt. A spruced-up bike from Mariner, with a novel choice of rider. He’s a bit big for the bike, wouldn’t you say? And I’d have put him a little higher in the scene. Best things for me are the refraction through the windshield, and the teddy bear in the back. A nice relocation from Deborah Morley, with neatly made reflections in the chrome. that’s a very big rider, though - he shouldn’t be able to see over the top of the windshield, surely. And I’d recommend both hands on the handlebars - or at least one. Thanks, David, for the starting image. |
Posted on 21/09/18 08:54:01 AM |
DavidMac
Director of Photoshop Posts: 5674 Reply ![]() |
Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Yes you're right. The picture is eye level. He is too low in frame. Raising him would make him float so he needs to get bigger. Thanks. _________________ The subtlety and conviction of any Photoshop effect is invariably inversely proportional to the number of knobs on it ....... |
Posted on 21/09/18 08:56:40 AM |
Mariner
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Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Thnks Steve. |
Posted on 21/09/18 11:52:02 AM |
GKB
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Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Thanks Steve _________________ ![]() |
Posted on 21/09/18 2:26:09 PM |
srawland
Pixel Perfectionist Posts: 885 Reply ![]() |
Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
Thank you, Steve. _________________ I'm still learning. |
Posted on 22/09/18 00:57:33 AM |
lwc
Hole in One Posts: 3227 Reply ![]() |
Re: Challenge 723: On your bike
![]() Thanks for the critiques... ![]() |
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