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Posted on 03/07/10 12:32:33 PM |
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Kuham
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Green World
Ohh!, have missed alot, guys you are doing great. I love all your creativities so far, I can see have missed this forum. Let say am back and done some few works so far, help me see how far have missed and improve. Check this out guys. Cheers Kuham |
Posted on 03/07/10 1:01:15 PM |
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Nick Curtain
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Re: Green World
I can't see an image?? Nick |
Posted on 03/07/10 9:12:46 PM |
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Kuham
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Re: Green World
Really!, I'll resend it. Thanks Nick. |
Posted on 03/07/10 9:14:39 PM |
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Kuham
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Re: Green World
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Posted on 04/07/10 06:46:40 AM |
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Nick Curtain
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Re: Green World
This is a great imaginitive piece, full of interest to keep the viewers attention and it tells a story, i.e. people visiting the World and being at different stages of their visit. When placing figures into a montage, it's essential to ensure the lighting is consistent. The figures, one pointing, are casting a shadow from roughly 3 O'clock, whereas the man in sunglasses is casting one from 2 O'clock, but he is lit from 4 O'clock. The same applies to the figures top left, who are lit from 9 &10 O'clock. The lettering would be completely in shadow and would cast a shadow across the grass because the sun is behind. I would suggest the the feathering on the rocks adjacent to the figures on the left is too heavy, given that the figures are so crisp. Why does the fence on the right become smaller as it gets nearer to us? I hope this helps and taken in the spirit intended. Nick |
Posted on 20/07/10 5:26:00 PM |
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Kuham
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Re: Green World
Yes it is, thanks Nick. |